Duude, yeah i didn't know you were making music! This is pretty cool, I like the main sound you have, and the vibe is nice. Obviously the mixing and whatnot is not perfect, but that's something you will improve on over time I guess. Overall the main thing is to try and vary the song more, have more unique sections and try to make it "go somewhere". Most of that just takes practice I think, but if you need help I can try... lol =}}